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醫藥論文英文摘要中的常見錯誤與評改
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1、醫藥科技工作者撰寫醫藥論文時一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要寫得準確與 否，很大程度上體現了作者的學術水平，也與論文的影響力有很大關系。我們有幸 從《醫藥導報》雜志社獲取了相當數量論文的英文摘要原稿。該刊特邀英文校譯— —同華中科技大學同濟醫學院馮新為教授，年逾九旬仍伏案筆耕，為這些稿件做了 大量細致深入的校譯工作，可謂句句汗水字字珠璣。給醫藥科技論文英文摘要的寫 作提供了一個范本，對廣大醫藥科技工作者來說也是一次極其珍貴的學習機會。本 刊特輯錄刊載其原文及馮教授所作修正、點評，以饗讀者。 2、編制體例：本文按照原文、修正、點評次序編寫；修改、插入處以黑體斜體 ，刪節處附括號說明，如有點評附上標數字注明。 1、 原文： Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC Scanning ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology, Tongji Medical C ollege, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, Ch ina; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Me dicine, Wuhan 430061,China) ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueti ng liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled wat er, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples we re determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Result: The aver age recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion: The method is simple, convenient and available. KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid 修正： Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC Scannin g ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2, Tongji Medical College, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2. The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine, Wuhan 430061,China) Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueti ng oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in d istilled water, and then extracted （into the sample刪去） with water-s aturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples we re subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λ R=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%,（and刪去） RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five刪去） batches of sam ples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method is simple, convenient and feasible. KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic acid 點評： 1、zhixueting 應為“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可譯為 hemorrhage-stopping，以方便國外讀者理解。 2、school可作“（大學里的）院”解，原意是“藥學院”，而非“藥理教研室” ，故改之。 3、斜體n表示“正”。 2、原文： Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu Capsules LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army) ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingm u Capsules. Methods: Tlcs was used, silica gel Tlc plate, developing so lvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1 :0.5) of which the upper solutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm. Result: The linea r relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9 995; arerage recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: This method i s simple, accurate and convenient. KEY WORDS TLcs; Qingre ming mu Ccapsules; Emodin 修正： Determination of Emodin Content in Qingremingmu1 Capsules LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provicial Institute of Drug Control , Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army) ABSTRACT Objective: To set up a method for the determination （content刪 去） of Emodin content in Qingre Mingmu Capsules. Methods: In the TLC a ssay, a 0.5% canboxymethyl cellulose sodium (was used刪去) silica gel G plate and a developing solvent with a mixture of benzene—ethyl format e—formic acid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) as the upper solution were used.λS=435nm,λR=530nm. Results: A good linear relationship was found when the sample amount (which刪去) ranged between 0.168-3.09μg （was good刪去）. The regression equation was as follows: Y=105417.7X-1 115.6, r=0.9995.The average rate of recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Co nclusion: The method is simple, convenient and accurate. KEY WORDS TLC; Qingre Mingmu Ccapsules; Emodin 點評： 1、中成藥名用斜體書寫，也可譯作removing pathogenic heat to improve acui ty of vision。 3、原文： Research on The Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsule XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO H ong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, The Third Medical Un iversity, Chengdu College of PLA 610081, China) ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and test the acute toxicity of Huning Ca psule on Kunming mice after an i.g. Methods: Count the death cases of m ice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. R esults: The LD50 of Huning Capsule on mice is 3981mg/kg. KEY WORDS Huning Capsule; Acute Toxicity; LD50 修正： An Experimental Study of the Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsules1 XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO H ong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, Chengdu Military Med ical College, The Third Military Medical University, Chengdu 610081, Ch ina) ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and determine the acute toxicity of Huni ng capsules (on Kunming mice刪去) after a single intragastric administr ation in the mouse. Methods: 50 Kunming mice were randomly divided into 5 equal groups, with 10 animals in each group. A single dose of 7500, 5630, 4200, 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were ad ministened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups, respectively. The numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were noted down and the mediar lether dose (LD50) of Huning Capsules was cal culated. (Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and wo rk out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. 刪去) Results: The LD50 of Huning Ca psule in mice was 3981mg/kg. Conclusion: Huning Capsules have only a mi nor acute toxicity. It is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. Fu rther study of its toxicity in long-term application is required. KEY WORDS Huning Capsules; Toxicity, acute; LD50 點評： 1、“呼寧膠囊”也可譯作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules.
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